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Dear John

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theoriginal

Uploaded 07 August, 2007

Writing / Poetry

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Potential lyrics for a folk song??

Any Muso's reading this?

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dear john, hate, political, the man, war.

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elgrotto 21 May, 08 @ 09:31 PM

This works.
The rhythm is strong and the imagery matches it.
Would make an excellent chant.

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lozza 25 Jan, 08 @ 09:26 PM

it screams stage piece!

lots of voice work costuming eery lights and great mvt! i hope one day i could make something that could do this piece justice!

MAY I?

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menschmachina 05 Jan, 08 @ 07:43 PM

The aspect of poetry that I love is the ability for words to form images through their connection to one another. I think this poem is highly applicable in our society at the moment. Very good.

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xennavor 29 Oct, 07 @ 09:31 AM

This is an excellent poem.