Proof that your creative zing can be a real occupation

This is very much the way i wrote many years ago. That is not to say i'm better now, just that i wrote differently then.
The meanings of lines and the meaning of the piece change and finally become full as all possibilities are envisioned.
To say I like this (i do) is to say that i don't feel very embarrassed about my old stuff.

perfect. so perfect I am eschewing capitals. perfectly formed, sparse yet dense with meaning, unflinching and unpretentious. more, more!