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The animation improves during the piece but I would hesitate to call the action on-stage animation. Stuff moved, nothing lived. I can only recommend focussing on the basics of motion - anticipation, follow-through, overlapping motion. It really felt like your animation was stifled. Don't be afraid to try stronger poses and snappier timing. I see this sort of thing in a lot of first films. There's so much to worry about in a film production that it's hard to focus on any one element. Your story was fine and meshed with the music well but your animation needs improvement.

Nice fun film. Cool character designs. Music works really well with the images. The editing could probably afford to be a little tighter and snappier in some areas but altogether its an enjoyable piece of animation.

nice use of colour and good character design, they felt orginal (not generic) In regards to animation I would think about squash / stretch distortions and adding weight / gravity to the characters, the donkey felt a little weightless and disconnected. I would also consider tightening up the edit ( less pauses in the action and dialogue) and a few more close-ups when the donkey is on stage)