Proof that your creative zing can be a real occupation

yeah - like the beat. the use of noice gives me some ideas - I like the effects - gives a real feeling of space and the beat isn't overwhelming. Not entirely sure about the ending - I want it to go somewhere or do more, not sure what.

I think the beat has plenty of potential. It is quite nicely put together and the ideas are there. It just needs to be fleshed out a little more, possibly through collaboration with others (as mentioned by others) or a greater sense of development/direction/structure. An interesting listen nonetheless. Great work!

I like it.

I wouldn't mind hearing some vocals whispering and echoing through this to bring a little more soul and personality to the piece.

Perhaps look into teaming up with one of the poets in the writing section??

Perhaps also team up with an animator or after effects editor to put some visuals to this.

Cavernous periodicity with a foreboding glare and diffusive use of space.