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brendancook from the Mob
29 October 2007
stop motion with fire and melting wax - ouch! hazardous working conditions!
Apart from the slight shake I would say the the camera work is stand out. Interesting framing and use of focus change, nice lighting too. I love the opening shots of the rocks - nice lighting.
the only shot i didn;t like was when you showed the lights flaring at the camera, for me that kind of gave away the location an dreduced the sense of scale that you acheived with the other shots.
I found the story to be too obscure, I like abstract work but when a charcter is involved it can be good to tell the audience a little more about them.
overall the duration of the track was too long to stick with the same scene for the whole vid (more scenes / or do a cutdown of the track if possible)
The climax / burning is great though.